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IwonMiszczPainta Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I think your style is pretty cool, your characters reminds me Uchihas or some kind of shamans. You shouldn't give up!
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Kreiser Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh! Is a pretty cool design! I also like those eyes, is almost like they shot a "Hey, attention here" ray and catched my eyes :P
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BerserkingGod Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you i try to get that look characters b4 such as Necrosis and Abalon :)
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Kreiser Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man, you have a great base, but... I dunno if it's your style but seems like the anatomy is a bit off and some lines are shaky and not well defined, at least on this drawing, in Necrosis and Abalon it looks better defined but could have some improvements, but as I said, you have a great base, would love to see you perfect your style :D
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BerserkingGod Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
well im 21 now lets see how im doing in ten years or so btw im comply self trained and my art teachers all said I suck and should give up not even kidding well anyway all my art is to help my hobby writing which I are really suck at I mean bad fanfic it suck at but I keep trying and that's what matters in the end I hope to tell stories for all my characters:)
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Kreiser Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oops, the whole reply didn't load at first... Welp, good to know you're going by that route, and again I hope the best for you :D
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Kreiser Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
*Sigh* I hate when art teachers do that!! Don't listen to that kind of "advice", if you love doing something you should keep going and keep improving, which you'll do without even noticing, both for drawing and writing, so I hope you keep having fun doing that and also by ignoring blind criticism.
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BerserkingGod Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks  its always nice to hear good criticism tho so feel free to call out on dumb stuff lol
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Kreiser Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, the most I can say is make more confident lines, some lines here look kinda weak like they're "... I'm a line... Whatever...", would be better to have lines that aren't as shaky, they can be sketchy, the sketchy look is awesome, but it has well defined lines, the end result feels better built, feels more solid... The other thing is thw hands but we all know what a nightmare they are, time will give you the improvement
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BerserkingGod Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
dear god yeas hands i would give my left hand to draw perfect hands
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